Magazines pages before feedback


Below are my three magazine pages before i have recieved any feedback on how to improve them. This feedback will tell what things i could change and also what things i could improve on to gain higher marks therefor it is something that i will benefit from.

For example on the contents page i could add alot more information on other pages in the magazine and not just focus on a small amount of the magazines internal pages.

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